The crush of consonants
in Tom Daschle & the open
vowels of John Yau have
got me thinking of Mary Ann
Caws who says “Poetry can be
any damn thing it wants”
The treaty of 1868
We are not alone in a room
Being alone is anarchy
I’m certain the mice are
in the ceiling
A bomb instead of a drawing
It snowed last night
The sun today a postscript
If what we remember is
aberration how come I
remember all the dull moments
leading up this gorgeous
feeling of being done
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Last night Sueyeun Juliette Lee had a book release party for her new book That Gorgeous Feeling at Higher Grounds Coffee Shop in Northern Liberties, officially one of the oldest suburbs in the country though by today’s standards it certainly wouldn’t strike one as a suburb. It was an enjoyable evening.
A few weeks ago Juliette asked friends if they would write an occasional poem for the event and many of us responded in kind. It was a fine night of poetry that built and built with poems and poems until Juliette read work from her new book and a work in progress (I can’t remember the title, but I do know that her chapbook Mental Commitment Robots is included in the work in progress). The poem above is the occasional poem that I wrote for the party.
Earlier in the day I had gone to listen to a panel on drawing that John Yau was moderating at UArts. On the panel: Joan Waltemath, Molly Dougherty , Simon Frost, and Kim Deitch. I appreciate listening to artists talk about process and materials because they talk about tools, color, and attention in ways that poets rarely do. My poem stole lines of dialogue from the panel’s participants - an approach (stealing people’s conversational lines) that I’ve been getting into lately. Ted Berrigan says he likes to beat people up throughout The Sonnets. I suppose I like to steal people’s lines because people say beautiful and complicated things all the time! Language is material and it is there in “physio-aural” form once someone speaks. I suppose I want to heighten my attention as I move about the day so I listen and write down phrases. Or, is it that the poem wants to heighten my attention? I think when Caws writes that “[p]oetry can be any damn thing it wants” it’s crucial that the agency is not in the person (the poet), but the poem.
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loved the poem. love you and caro. love this site!
Using other people’s lines is a wonderful idea. I once sat on the R8 and listened to a woman’s phone conversation about how she was in the witness protection program (she clearly wasn’t crazy), and the FBI cad told her that morning to get on a plane and get out of town that morning so, well, she was. Oh, and the good lord had also told her to give her friend a call, so how was her friend doing? I spent a week wishing I had written the whole thing down. But any bus ride in Philly will yield a wealth of material. Want to take the 23 sometime soon?
Good story. Good links. “Mental” links to Paro, the robot seal. So cute. & yet all that cuteness makes me feel so sad… Why, I wonder, what is the cute
Here’s a link to Frances Richards’ “Fifteen Theses on The Cute” that appeared in Cabinet several years ago. Thought you might find it interesting.
http://www.cabinetmagazine.org/issues/4/cute.php
dear stan
november-
february.
pick up the pace cowboy.
I want to say - thank you for this!
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